Friday

Twenty-One Things I've Learned as a Poet


Twenty-One Things I Have Learned This Past Year

1.   Nobody know what "making it" as a poet means, at least while they are alive.
2.   Even if you "make it," there really is no there there.
3.   Nobody, and I mean nobody, makes money at poetry, except for Billy Collins.
4.   Everybody and their dog has a blog and writes poetry.
5.   I don't agree with the elitists that it is all about form.
6.   I don't agree with the masses that it is all about emotion.
7.   I don't agree with the abstractionists, that is all about deeper meaning.
8.   I don't agree that accessible has to mean boring, but much of it is.
9.  That there are fads in poetry, the current one is free verse, sparse, form obsessed and obtuse.
10. Poetry accolades are quickly washed away in the flood of rejections.
11. “Success" is almost always accompanied by news of rejection, as if they do it on purpose.
12. "Nobody reads poetry," except when it is free on my blog!
13. No matter what you write someone will disagree with how you wrote it, or what you wrote.
14. Workshops and classes really do help.
15. You look amateurish when you try to sound like any of the old greats.
16. You look elitist when you try to sound hip, with-it, modern or cool.
17. You shouldn't write to a fad.  Write what you love!
18. Poets are like farmers, planting seeds, watering the land, waiting patiently for spring to come.
19. It doesn't matter what anyone thinks, poets gotta write.
20. The term "making it" is irrelevant in poetry, like the terms "making a living," "getting rich,"
and "I spent the day shopping at Neimans."
21. Poets are all descended from Don Quixote, reaching for an impossible dream.


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Poet of the Week: Allyson Whipple


Allyson Whipple grew up in Ohio, earning her B.A. in English from Kenyon College, and her M.A. in English from Case Western Reserve University. She came to Austin in 2008, and has spent the past four years being inspired by the landscape. Her poems have most recently appeared in Southern Women's Review and TRIVIA: Voices of Feminism, and is forthcoming in the 2013 Texas Poetry Calendar. Allyson also is the founder and primary author of literaryaustin.com, a blog she started to help promote local authors, publishers, and booksellers. You can read more about her work at http://allysonmwhipple.wordpress.com

Questions for Allyson
1.            What inspires you as a poet?
Motion. While I identify myself as a poet of place, my work primarily involves moving through the settings of my work. In particular, I write a lot of poems about driving; few things get me thinking about poems like driving down a country highway on a beautiful day. Even if I'm not writing about travel, various locations around Texas make their way into my work. And my favorite poets all drive me to work harder: Paul Allen, Carrie Fountain, Barbara Hamby, Audre Lorde, Naomi Shihab Nye, Abe Louise Young, Mary Oliver, and Walt Whitman. 
2.            What advice do you have for other poets?
1) Write every day, but also know when you need some time off. The regular habit is very important, but it's also vital to know when you're burned out and need to direct your energies elsewhere. Don't beat yourself up if you need to take a break. You'll be better off for it.
2) You can fit poetry into your daily life. Even if you only get a 30-minute lunch break at your day job, that's enough to draft a short poem. You really will be surprised what you can fit even into fifteen minutes a day. 
 3) When revising, read your work aloud. That is the best advice a teacher has given me. Few people enjoy doing it, but it's essential. 
3.            What prompted you to start writing poetry?
 When I was twelve, I one day had the urge to write a poem, and the rest is history. No, I don't know where that urge came from. It just happened. Of course, that first poem wasn't any good, but it was the start of a very fruitful life.
4.            Where do you see yourself going in the future as a poet?
I'll probably be working on poems of place for a while yet, especially because I have two projects in place that revolve around that theme. But I've also begun to probe the fields of physics and mathematics for fresh inspiration. I'd also like to start branching out into more political poetry in the future. My goals are to write, revise, and publish as much as possible, and to always keep growing artistically.
5.            What are your favorite poetry journals?
I'm a devoted subscriber to The Kenyon Review. I also have an affinity for Front Porch, Bat City Review, and Gulf Coast. What I love more than journals, though, is investing in chapbooks. They're usually cheaper than books and journals, and it's a great way to get exposure to poets you might not otherwise encounter. I have found some amazing treasures by going to a bookstore and getting an assortment of chapbooks.
6.            Can you tell us a little about the poems your chose to present today?  What inspired them maybe, or anything else you’d like to say about them.
"Goldfinch" is a poem of ambivalence. Many of my poems are. This one is a love poem, but it's not. The emotions in it are not straightforward. Nature is not straightforward. That's a theme I love to explore in poetry: ambivalence, and the fact that emotions like love or anger get complicated, because a situation is so rarely black and white. 
"Traversing Houston by Bus" is dedicated to my dance partner, because without him, the poem wouldn't have been written. He found out about a west coast swing event happening in Houston in October of 2010, and encouraged me to join him. Part of the festivities involved getting on a party bus with a bunch of other dancers, and doing a west coast swing flash mob around town. You wouldn't know it from the poem, though. That weekend was more than just dancing, and that's where the poem comes in. That was the weekend when I really began to feel as though I belonged in Texas. I fit in here, to the point where a city I'd despised for two years (Houston) was starting to feel like home -- or, at the very least, the kind of place for which I could find a begrudging respect.  
"You Can See The Silence" is one of my favorite pieces of my career up to this point, and certainly my favorite of all my Texas poems. It came out of one of the exercises in Wingbeats: Exercises and Practice in Poetry, written on a hot summer night when it was too stuffy to go outside, but being cooped up in the air conditioning had me restless. It was one of those rare poems that was close to finished on the first draft. The whole thing just coalesced.
 
Allyson Whipple Poetry


Goldfinch      

The female goldfinch
is dull, brown, paltry-colored, the
males are summer-yellow
and she resents the
built-in protection
nature has arranged without her
consent,
frumpy
next to the other half
of her species
(They might all
look the same on the outside but
beneath their feathers
they are individually
fascinating.)

Yes she
might need to blend in
but she would rather have had a
choice in her body,
who cares if she is
unfit, who cares if she
does not pass on her DNA?

This goldfinch does not
fly yet -
though she has
taken time to
develop wings,
build muscles,
grow feathers -
all she needs now is
confidence to
lift her in the air
but in her mind she
does not have the
instinct

Your goldfinch is
defective, she does not
nest, she builds in July
and by August
she destroys her work, 
starts anew
in a fit of boredom.

Just as she molts
twice a year, drops bland
feathers in clumps and patches,
she needs
to shed everything
she has done before -
needs the potential
of new beginnings.

Your goldfinch loves -
if birds can love -

Romantic, to
think that
birds might have
emotions,
but especially passion for
their partners,
these mates with whom they
develop identical calls
(humans look alike as they
age together, but finches
develop one voice)

What do we know
about birds,


what do we know
about the couple next door?



Traversing Houston By Bus
 for John Burroughs

Squares are the only geometry
that make sense to me,
graph paper the only part of
math class I liked, wasting
time filling in the
spaces with pencil, going
darker and darker, making welts
on the other side of the page,
creating designs
rather than correct answers.
Maybe if I hadn't been so intent
on filling in the blanks, if I had paid attention
to circles and ovals,
to circumference,
I wouldn't get so
disoriented here, wouldn't be so dizzy.
Maybe if I had been receptive
to soft lines and curves
I wouldn't be dependent on right
angles for navigation.
Maybe I'd
be able to make sense of the pulse, the unstructured sky,
the arterial overpasses.
This city loops
around a spoke
of veined highways,
overlapping asphalt,
and a cracking concrete center which
I pass over, under, around, through
again and again
unable to find the heart.


You can see the silence

It's still too hot
for the neighbors
to walk their dogs.
It's just late enough
for the children
to have gone to bed.
And on Sunday
nobody becomes
a raucous
poolside drunk.
I can't take much more
than the air
conditioner hum.
I've been driven from
the bedroom of my
musician, who never
stops playing or
listening. Raw
notes emanate
all night long.
I'm tempted
to step outside.
But this is Texas
where the stars
won't cool you down.
This is Texas, where summer
heat makes gossip
rise like dough.
This is Texas
where neighbors read
your business
from your shadow.

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Monday

Rant by Helena Nelson

I found this poem reading the latest issue of The RialtoThe Rialto graciously contacted the author and both consented to allowing me to share Rant with you.  Seeing the professionalism of poetry in the U.K. makes me wish I lived there.

I hope you enjoy it as much as my husband and I did!

Rant

Down with poetry! It’s all over the place,
clogging up the drains, pretending
to be special. It’s printed on demand,
when there is no demand. Bookshops
don’t want it but still it gets printed. There are
poems in broadsheets and pamphlets
and hardbacks and paperbacks
and postcards and posters—
all of them rubbish! Bag it and bin it!
Who can understand it? Half of it
doesn’t make sense, the other half
doesn’t want to. Nobody knows how to read it. Oh
they pretend they do, but they haven’t a clue.
Apart from at funerals, what is the point of it?
It doesn’t even rhyme, or it rhymes,
which is worse. There are magazines
with pages full of nothing but poems.

And other magazines with pages of poems
and more pages of reviews of poems
and more pages of interviews with poets
and articles about poets and letters from poets
about poems and poets. They are all mad.
Delusion, delusion—
the confusion of profusion. Give me
a small piece of perfect prose
any day of the week. Down with
bluff and puff and blurb and bluster!
Down with accolades and encomiums!
Down with performance and festivals!
Down with clamour and slammers
and ‘Best Of ‘ anthologies! Down with ‘débuts’
and prizes and longlists and shortlists!
Down with Winning Poems! Down with podcasts
and laurels and laureates and academies!
Down with young poets and old poets
and permanently middle-aged poets,
and poets who think their poems will sell!
Down with chopping sentences
into stanzas, especially couplets! Down with poets
who marry, or cohabit and breed—
down with their seed! Get them off the radio
and into a job. Down with payments for poets
to teach poets to write poetry! (Why
encourage them?) Down with poetry retreats
and poetry degrees and MAs and PhDs
and Writing CVs! Down with nominations!
Down with mentors and workshops

and bards and bulletin boards!
Down with networking, fretworking, please-be-my-pet working!
Down with i-Pads and i-Phones and Blackberries
and e-zines and webinars and Kindle!
Down with what they haven’t even thought of yet
but will be the Next New Thing! 
Down with book fairs and residencies!
Down with List Poems and Found Poems
and Prose Poems and Concrete Poems
and National Poetry Day! Down with line breaks
and Renga! Down with PoWriMo
and Haiku and Acrostics and poems with 14 lines
that say they are Sonnets! Down with the Muse!
Bring back twenty years between collections.
Bring back TB. And garrets. And bedlam. And capital
letters at the start of every line.
And meaningful punctuation. And flogging
for blogging. Bring back quill pens and blotting paper
and astronomically expensive ink. Bring back scansion
and writing half the time in Latin

on tombstones. Bring back dead poets.
Bring back parchment. Bring back embarrassment.
And, for persistent po-fenders and recidivists,
villanelle and sestina producers,
poetry promoters, poetry patrons, poetry peddlers,
poetry printers and poetry publishers—
bring back writer’s block!

Helena Nelson
Rant first appeared in the Spring 2012 issue of The Rialto, a wonderful poetry journal out of the U.K.

Helena Nelson runs HappenStance Press, which mainly (but not exclusively) publishes poetry pamphlets. She sometimes also writes poems. Her last collection was Plot and Counter-Plot, [http://www.shoestring-press.com/2010/11/plot-and-counter-plot/] Shoestring Press, 2010.

Saturday

Favorite Poet of the Week-Billy Collins for Mother's Day




Billy Collins is my favorite contemporary poet.  If I had to pick one poem of his as my favorite, it would be "The Lanyard."  It is the best Mother’s Day poem ever.  I hope you enjoy!

Watch Billy Collins read "The Lanyard" here:


An excerpt from The Lanyard:

She gave me life and milk from her breasts,
and I gave her a lanyard.
She nursed me in many a sick room,
lifted spoons of medicine to my lips,
laid cold face-cloths on my forehead,
and then led me out into the airy light
and taught me to walk and swim,
and I, in turn, presented her with a lanyard.

Read the rest of the poem at:

http://www.billy-collins.com/2005/06/the_lanyard.html


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Tuesday


Is Political or Agenda Driven Poetry a Good Idea?

Lately, there has been a lot of encouragement for poets to write on behalf of political issues. There have been demands that our poet laureates pick up their pens in support of political issues. Given, the minimal reimbursement to poet laureates, I’m not sure that we should demand anything of them.  Nonetheless, is poetry with an agenda a good idea?

Having spent many years as a lawyer fighting political issues at the state and federal level, I am no stranger to conflict and disagreement.  Generally, I stay away from writing political poems because they don’t inspire me.  I’ve seen enough and don’t want to read poetry about my work. I also think
it is easy for political/agenda poetry to become propaganda, or a tool for those who wish to control
others.

Sometimes Agenda Writing is Based on Inadequate Research

There is another reason why I am skeptical of agenda poetry. In my screenwriting classes we are taught not to bring an agenda to our writing, despite many who do it anyway.  Movies produced to affect a change in policy are usually not highly regarded by professional writers. It is a cheap manipulative trick, or so the belief goes.  However, there have been many movies that have achieved box office success pushing an agenda.

When I first started as a young lawyer interning for the Texas 3rd Court of Appeals, one of the judges sat down to talk to me over lunch one day.  He was a major player in the state Democratic machine.  He gave me what I think to be some of the best advice I’ve ever had.  He said, When you analyze the case, it is imperative that you do not make up your mind as to what the outcome should be before you read the case, apply the law and follow the facts, not the other way around.  Some opinions by some courts in Texas are weighted less than others.  The 3rd Court of Appeals was known for sound opinions, free of an agenda.

So many times we reach an opinion before doing exhaustive research, convinced that we are right, often making erroneous assumptions.  We hear a news pundit, or celebrity, spout an opinion, take it for fact, and march off carrying our banner without really knowing what the truth is.  Many times, upon further consideration, we would not choose the opinions we have, but many of us immediately become entrenched on our positions never looking under the surface.

Why do you Read Poetry-For its Emotional Content, the Language, the Sounds?

This brings me back to poetry with an agenda.  Poetry is important to a lot of people for a lot of different reasons.  Some enjoy words, others like the emotions or scenes evoked, still others are searching for healing or comfort and some are trying to change the world.  Many famous poets are known for their political poetry. 

Is what we are told in fiction and screenplay writing classes relevant to poetry?

Let the characters write the novel, let them breathe.  Sometimes you will think the book is going to be about one thing and your characters have a different idea. 

 After my husband died, I would get online at night, unable to sleep, and turn my tears into a poem.  I posted them to my online support group. Often, I intended to rail at God or indict God, the lawyer that I am.  Instead, I would be surprised by my ending.  What would start out as a rant to God, Why, Why, Why, would turn into an affirmation of God, the world, the beauty that still remained. I used to say, I don’t know who just wrote that because that is not what I intended to write! In other words, my agenda was high jacked by the honesty of the poem.

Can Political/Agenda Poetry Avoid Manipulation?

Writing poetry with an agenda in mind may not be all bad, but it can be tricky.  The quality of good poetry depends on the degree of research into the issue and whether or not the poet allows the poem to breathe, or if the poet wrestles the pen to maintain control.  With good research and a willingness to let the facts fall where they fall, at least the issues will be presented honestly and not from an overly-
emotional knee-jerk understanding.

Meaningful poetry often comes from somewhere beyond our thoughts, our ego, our minds.  If we take the facts that make up our political agenda and let them fall where they may, presenting them honestly, the poem will not be a poem with an agenda, rather a poem about life. Poets paint pictures with words.  If we are honest in our painting, how can it be called agenda poetry?

I would love to hear what you think about this issue.
Do you write poetry from a political position or agenda?
Do you think political poetry is good?
What is your favorite political poem?
Is political poetry only good if you agree with the position of the poet?
How can we write good political poetry?


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Monday

Round Top Poetry Festival 2012

 Royer's Cafe
 Festival Hill Garden
 Festival Hill Chapel
 Fesetival Hill
 Bud Royer, Royer's Cafe
 Concert Stage
 Reginald Gibbons
 Concert Stage
 Concert Hall
 Naoimi Shihab Nye
 Cole Cottage
Aubrey Cottage

Friday

Poet of the Week-Marcelle Kasprowicz


 
Marcelle Kasprowicz was born in France in 1942.  Her work is influenced by her childhood there during WWII and its aftermath.  She received an M.A. from the University of Texas at Austin and taught for twenty-five years in the Austin Independent School District.  Marcelle writes in English and French.  She also translates her French poems into English. Many of her poems have been published in reviews, anthologies and on line.  She has been awarded several prizes. Her first book, Organza Skies: Poems from the Davis Mountains, was published in 2005 (ISBN 0-9776047-0-5).  Organza Skies, is available on Amazon.
Questions for Marcelle Kasprowicz

1. What inspires you as a poet?

In general, life experiences, memories, readings, especially poetry.
I was born in France in 1942 during the second world war and lived the aftermath of the war. Because of that, my greatest concern is violence in all its forms, wars, relationships, nature. I also feel a deep connection with children and the magic of childhood.

2. What advice do you have for other poets?

Writing poetry is not an activity that you can easily control. You may not have any ideas for days, weeks and then several in a few hours.
sometimes a poem calls another or others.
Do not be afraid to use ideas or words that pop into your head. You might not see an immediate connection with the poem you are working on yet, but sometimes they become the best part of the poem, open other avenues, expand meanings. . .
If you want to  improve your poetry you must read and write. You must also give yourself time to think. Stop moving and doing; just reflect. 

3.What prompted you to start writing poetry?

English is my second language and I never would have thought that I could write in English until I attended a writing workshop which showed me I could do it. Now I write in English and French both and I translate my own poetry. My second book has a section with French poems and their translations.

4. No particular journal
I like to check out new poetry books from the library.

5. How did you come up with the name of your book?

I wrote and published two books.
The first one," Organza Skies, Poems from the Davis Mountains" in 2005. The title was inspired by the West Texas skies which seem to crackle and shimmer( like the fabric) with stars on winter nights
The second one, is "Children Playing with Leopards" and is just off the press. The idea for the title came from a poem by Donald Justice in which he describes a mental patient's paintings. For me it pictures the magical connection between children and animals.

6. Do you have any advice you'd like to pass on about publishing a book?

If you are planning to have a book published, steel yourself for numerous rejections and be persistent.
Since I am 70 years old and do not want to spend the rest of my time and effort looking for a publisher, I publish my own books. Writing is what I enjoy and what I concentrate on.

7 Can you tell us a little about the poems you chose to present today?

I think all three of them represent my concerns but also my sense of the marvelous in the world.
The first one is about the brutality and senselessness of wars yet also about rebirth.
The second one, I think I have already discussed.
The third one represents extremes of violence which seem beyond our control.


Marcelle's new book:




Some of Marcelle's Poetry


Children Playing with Leopards

 ... children playing with leopards ...
(Donald Justice)

I swear
I saw children playing with leopards

I saw them in a game of tag
Heated children chasing leopards

I saw them play hide-and-seek
leopards hoisting the littlest ones
like cubs
hiding them in the leafy branches
of a tree

I saw a child and a leopard
sitting side by side on a low bench
sharing a book and a lollipop

I saw them play dress up
laughing
exchanging spots
just to see

I saw two
holding hands
the child rubbing a furry palm
marveling at the hidden claws

I saw the leopard
slowly withdrawing its paw
tickled by an incurable itch
confused by a sudden pounding
of its heart

 
The Ax
 

You despair

All your trees cut down
bleeding
Lifetimes of love in the shade
gone
Lives like seasons
stripped of their leaves
songbirds orphaned

You can't make yourself look at me
as I stand here ax in hand
covered in blood

O.K.
It was not just the trees
I cut down

Please
look at me
It was not in my hands

I only obeyed the ax

 



Green Grasses of Hiroshima


Wait

The ashes
haven't stopped raining
and if you slip your hand
under their stifling coat
you can feel their warmth
still
Wait

And the kimono flowers
tattooed in flesh
by the falling sun
haven't opened their gaping mouths
yet
Wait

Wait

How dare you
grow
so thick
so green
invade the dying city
when its people's midnight hair
by the handful
falls

Oh, wait
wait until the first crocuses
which bloomed and bled
under the skin
start to fade
Wait


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